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in Just

in Just in Just-
spring       when the world is mud-
luscious the little
lame balloonman

whistles    far    and wee

and eddieandbill come
running from marbles and
piracies and it's
spring

when the world is puddle-wonderful

the queer
old balloonman whistles
far and wee
and bettyandisabel come dancing

from hop-scotch and jump-rope and

it's
spring
and
      the

         goat-footed

balloonMan        whistles
far
and
wee

         e.e. cummings
Spring!

Spring! Here in the Northern Hemisphere, spring was sprung late last Friday night. That, the return of daylight saving time, and (some) warming weather mean summer is not too far away! Hurrah! Join us in our spring revelry of words today.


1. naiad: (a) a bud in a freshwater bryozoan that overwinters in a chitinous envelope and develops into a new individual in spring; (b) any of the nymphs in classical mythology living in and giving life to lakes, rivers, springs, and fountains; (c) any of several anemones with palmately compound leaves and large usually white or purple early spring flowers; (d) a solo tap dance with sharp foot accents, springs, leg flings, and heel clicks.

2. bock: (a) a small building situated over a spring and used for cool storage (as of dairy products or meat); (b) regularly repeated or renewed: recurrent; (c) any of various spring-blooming plants; (d) a strong dark rich beer usually sold in the early spring.

3. overturn: (a) made or become fresh; (b) the sinking of surface water and rise of bottom water in a lake or sea that results from changes in temperature that commonly occur in spring and fall; (c) moving by leaps or springs: jumping; (d) renewed energy or endurance.

4. rose fever: (a) something resembling dew in purity, freshness, or power to refresh; (b) a lazy or restless feeling often associated with the onset of spring; (c) hay fever occurring in the spring or early summer - called also rose cold; (d) a fungus-related blight affecting seasonally dormant rose bushes.

5. vivify: (a) to endow with life or renewed life: animate; (b) a state or time of beauty, freshness, and vigor; (c) to add comic relief; (d) an azalea (Rhododendron canadense) of northeastern North America that has spring-flowering pink blossoms.

6. hackneyed: (a) full of or renewed in vigor: refreshed; (b) a small finch (Passerina cyanea of the family Cardinalidae) chiefly of eastern North America of which the male is largely deep blue in spring and summer; (c) lacking in freshness or originality; (d) a spring that is the source of a stream.

7. bridal wreath: (a) a variety of opal that is deposited around some hot springs and geysers in white or grayish concretions; (b) a snow pattern resembling lace occurring in late spring along the foothills of northern mountain ranges; (c) the base of a plant from which the roots spring; (d) a spirea (Spiraea prunifolia) widely grown for its umbels of small white flowers borne in spring.

8. breakup: (a) a spring of a horse; (b) the breaking, melting, and loosening of ice in the spring; (c) to make young or youthful again: give new vigor to; (d) any of a genus (Erythronium) of small spring-flowering bulbous herbs of the lily family.

9. nip-up: (a) to remain fresh or unimpaired; (b) to impart fresh or renewed energy to: energize; (c) a spring from a supine position to a standing position; (d) a stream, spring, or pool of freshwater.

10. seep: (a) a small spring; (b) from a fresh beginning: anew, again; (c) a small brown tree frog (Pseudacris crucifer syn. Hyla crucifer) of the eastern United States and Canada that has a shrill piping call and breeds in ponds and streams in the spring; (d) to renovate, remake, revise, or renew thoroughly.

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  • 1 to 2 correct: Stuck in waist-deep mud.
  • 3 to 5 correct: Spring fever - and headache and sore throat.
  • 6 to 7 correct: Noticeably brighter than the equinox.
  • 8 to 9 correct: Up there with the robins.
  • All 10 correct: Bright and blooming!
Today's Poll
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Weekly Grammar Tip
Fewer and Less

Fewer and Less Fewer is by nature a word applicable to number; less is a word applicable to quantity. Hence, in making numerical comparisons, fewer, not less, is required: We had fewer water skiers yesterday than a week ago. This distinction has no bearing on ten less seven (diminished by seven); and we say, of course, a lesser number. But in all the following, less should be replaced by fewer:

  • Kate had no less than seven separate offers to buy her house.
  • It was standard equipment on no less than seven ski boats we tested.
  • We easily have fifty candidates for Directors, not less than twice the number of vacancies to be filled.
  • Of 30,000 students headed for Daytona Beach, less than 2,000 would remain consistently sober.
  • The final tournament roster included 194 names--thirteen less than the pre-tournament signup sheet indicated.
  • We must increase production, but with about 2,000 less workers.


    The antonym of less, which is more, applies to either number or quantity. When qualifying a number, it ought not to be contradicted by an associated word that applies only to quantity--e.g., much or little. With little more than 500 water skiers in a town population of 8,000 requires few or a noncommittal hardly in place of little. The set phrase more or less is an encouragement to the confusion of quantity with number: He had chosen one of those ruthless competitors, more or less of whom are to be found on every team / The tattoo maniacs and chain-swinging bikers, of whom more or less were always hanging about the dock. In these, more or less might well be replaced by some, which, like more, serves for both quantity and number.


    An occasional construction in which the ideas of quantity and number are hardly distinguishable will be equally tolerant of less and fewer: The three million seasonal farm workers normally work less than 150 days in a year. Here 150 days can be felt as either a specified number of days or a unitary measure of time (as five months or less than half a year would be). Sometimes an ostensibly numerical expression is unmistakably a unitary measure and, as such, excludes fewer. We take a billion dollars as a sum of money, not as a number of units; fifty feet as a measure of distance, not as one foot added to forty-nine other feet; thirty minutes as a stretch of time, exactly like half an hour. With these expressions a singular verb is appropriate (A billion dollars is more easily printed by the government than it used to be / Fifty feet is too short a distance), and the quantitative less is therefore correct in comparisons; fewer would sound absurd.

    Source: Modern American Usage, Jacques Barzun, 1966.

  • Word of the Week
    raison d'�tre

    raison d'�tre Pronunciation: ray-zoh(n) detr(h)
    Function: noun
    Etymology: French
    Date: 1864
    Definition: reason or justification for existence

    Example: "From the moment de Gaulle gave allied troops and NATO headquarters few weeks' notice, forcing the quick relocation to an abandoned hospital in Brussels, France's raison d'être has been to trip up American power while standing under its security umbrella."
    - Wall Street Journal, March 26, 2009, p. A12.

    Definition source: Merriam-Webster's Eleventh Collegiate Dictionary.

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