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The Semicolon and Independent Clauses

  
  
  

Watch out!It is not uncommon to see commas, semicolons, and periods confused when it comes to joining two independent clauses for forceful and effective writing. Make your writing more powerful by understanding the proper use of the semicolon.

An independent clause contains a subject and verb, and conveys a complete thought. It is a sentence in its own right.

When joining two independent clauses without the use of a coordinating conjunction (and, but, or, or nor), use a semicolon.

  • I went to the market; I forgot to buy milk.

Or treat the clauses as separate sentences.

  • I went to the market. I forgot to buy milk.

Do not use a comma in the absence of a coordinating conjunction.

  • Wrong: I went to the market, I forgot to buy milk.

Overuse of small sentences can affect the flow of your writing, resulting in Dick and Jane grade school primer-type text. The use of semicolons can help eliminate this and can align sentence content more closely. However, semicolons should be used sensibly. Be sure that the independent clauses involved are directly related, and take into account the balance of the clauses in terms of length and import; otherwise treat them as separate sentences.

  • No: Thank you for your letter of May 12; we are updating your contact information and you should receive a revised contract within three business days.
  • Yes: Thank you for your letter of May 12. We are updating your contact information and you should receive a revised contract within three business days.

 

Sources: The Gregg Reference Manual; Fumblerules by William Safire; the Internet

Comments

But, "I came, I saw, I conquered." Nonetheless the point is well taken that run-on sentences must be avoided.
Posted @ Tuesday, September 13, 2011 5:22 by P. A. Miller
"I came, I saw, I conquored" is an English translation of a classical Latin phrase. Perhaps that explains the comma splices.
Posted @ Wednesday, September 14, 2011 9:01 by M. E. Moore
*conquered*
Posted @ Wednesday, September 14, 2011 9:03 by M.E. Moore
There is always writer's license, and there are (almost) always exceptions. The conquering Caesar is no doubt one of those exceptions!
Posted @ Wednesday, September 14, 2011 9:24 by Phil Jamieson
Using a semicolon to join two independent clauses is not quite that simple. They should be clauses that are closely related, often expressing a contrast, such as "Some people write with a computer; others write with a quill and ink."
Posted @ Wednesday, September 14, 2011 11:14 by Peter Feldman
Actually, comma usage instead of semi-colons is used by many thoughtful writers. In those cases, you have to look at the sentence and see what makes sense. I came; I saw; I conquered would look ridiculous. The same with: I came. I saw. I conquered.
Posted @ Saturday, September 17, 2011 5:18 PM by Katherine Andes
The ancient Romans had it easy! They did not use punctuation, so Caesar had no need to worry over his sentence construction.
Posted @ Thursday, September 29, 2011 2:41 PM by Margaret Gloag
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Posted @ Tuesday, October 04, 2011 8:47 PM by Canada Goose Parka
I think that it is entirely silly trying to write effectively without the appropriate use of a punctuation mark as critical as the semi-colon. Nowadays, just about anything goes; and that is so unfortunate because; in our cavalier, mad rush to cast long held conventions into the sea; we've,in essence, pelted away all the long-revered standards upon which our very lives have rested.
Posted @ Saturday, October 08, 2011 6:29 PM by Moulton A. Mayers
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